请教一个英语翻译

不舒服，中文味道太浓了

1， normal应该比common好，
不用需要修饰：i am a normal girl
如果一定要修饰：i am so normal 不用加girl
或者用such，感觉稍好一点。
i am such a normal girl

2，干吗用被动？have your company不是蛮好的嘛
the journey following my dream不对的，用to或者towards吧

journey to（wards） my dream
i have your company on the journey towards my dreams

放在一起

i am so normal but lucky to have your company on the journey to my dreams

i am such a normal girl, but so lucky to have your company on the journey towards my dreams

很好啊,不用改啊,

Though I'm a common girl,I dreamed of being a partner of you in the journey.

I am such a common girl that is lucky to have you by myside in the persuit of my dreams.