根据下面提示写一篇不少于60个词的短文。 1:我的朋友TOM是学生,是一个有趣的人,人人喜欢他。

2024年11月17日 21:27
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My friend Tom is a student. Everyone likes him because he is an interesting person.
His father is American, so he speaks English. His mother is Japanese, so he speaks Japanese, too. Moreover, because he was born in China, he also speaks Chinese.
Tom is good at American football; he wants to be like Backham. Therefore, he joined the football club and became the team's captain.

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我的朋友汤姆是个学生。大家都很喜欢他,因为他是个有趣的人。
他的父亲是美国人,所以他会说英文。他的母亲是日本人,所以他也会说日语。再加上,因为他出生于中国,所以他也会说中文。
汤姆擅长于美式足球;他想要像Backham那样。因此,他加入了足球俱乐部并成为了队伍的队长。

评论:
Backham踢的是足球还是橄榄球?
我加了一些连接词。也许(尤其是那个“因此”)会改一些原文的逻辑性,但我认为这样句型比较不那么单调。
最后,他加入的是俱乐部,但成为的是队伍的队长,虽然我照翻了,但是个人认为逻辑上有点奇怪。除非那个俱乐部有支队伍。不过这方面我就不清楚了。

网友(2):

My friend Tom is a student who is an interseted person , everyone likes him. Because his father is an American, his mother is a Japanese, he was born in China, so he can speak Chinese, English and Japanese. He is a good soccer player and he wants to become a football player like Backham. Tom joined the football club and became a team leader of the team.

网友(3):

My friend Tom ,an interesting people 。Everyone will like him if he meet Tom.Because his father is an Amarecan and his mother is a Japanese ,he was bown in china.So he can say chinese ,English and Japanese.He can play Amarecan soccer well and he wants to be a soccer player like Backham.And his dream has come ture .Now he is a member of the football club and he bacame the captain of the club.Good luck to Tom.我的朋友TOM是一个有趣的人。如果见过他,人人都会喜欢他。因为他的父亲是美国人,母亲是日本人,他出生在中国,所以他会说中文,英文和日文。他的美式足球踢的不错,而且他想成为一名像Backham那样的足球运动员。他的梦想已经实现了,他现在是足球俱乐部的一员,并成为队伍的队长。祝Tom好运。