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摘要
随着我国社会经济的持续高速发展和投资体制改革的不断深化，环境影响评价已经成为建设项目在开工建设前必经的一个审批关， 成为 防止新建项目产生污染和生态环境破坏的主要措施，是我国实施可持续发展战略、实行以预防为主环保政策的重要体现。
Abstract
With the continuous rapid development of Chinese society and economy and the deepening of the reformation of investment system, the environmental impact assessment（EIA） of a construction project has becoming a necessary step before it can get started and the main measures to prevent the pollution and the destroy of ecological environment that produced by new constructions, which is also an important embodiment of the real purpose of sustainable development strategy and prevention —oriented policy of Chinese governments.
以上为第一段
本设计对白云区龙博置地广场进行环境影响评价。 主要工作包括:(1)调查和分析项目环境污染和生态破坏现状, 并根据建设项目污染物排放状况，结合场地周围环境特点，确定评价范围；(2)对地下水、空气和声环境进行现状评价; (3)通过对建设项目的建设过程所造成的各种污染及生态破坏的预测, 确定评价项目对环境影响的范围和程度; (4)分析论证项目现有污染防治措施的可行性和合理性, 提出有效的生态环境破坏减缓、恢复与补偿措施, 从环境保护及生态恢复角度论证项目建设的可行性, 为相关工作提供科学依据。
关键词：环境污染，可持续发展，可行性
This deign is an EIA of the Longbai landmark in Baiyun district. The work of this paper includes mainly four aspects as followed: (1)The present situation of the environment pollution and the ecological damage was investigated and analyzed and, according to the pollutants discharged by the project and considering the environment characteristics around, the assessment range was determined. (2) The current status of groundwater, air and acoustic environment was assessed. (3) The range and degree influencing the environment by the project assessed were determined by predicting the various pollutions and ecological damage caused in the construction process. (4) At the end of this paper, it analyzed the rationality of the existing measures of pollution preventions and controls and discussed the feasibility of the project construction from the perspective of environmental protection and ecological restoration and put forward some effective measures to slow down, recover and compensate the ecological destruction, which offered some scientific base for further work.
Keyword: environment pollution, sustainable development, feasibility

在翻译过程中，对所给原文做了一些细微的调整，一并附于上面。看着就这么两段，翻译起来还挺费时的，居然用了3个小时。呵呵，还是自己的英语水平还不行呢，还得多练练。

摘要
随着我国社会经济的持续高速发展和投资体制改革的不断深化，环境影响评价已经成为建设项目在开工建设前必经的一个审批关，是为了防止新建项目产生污染和生态环境破坏的主要措施，是我国实施可持续发展战略、实行以预防为主环保政策的重要体现。
Abstract:
In light of the sustained high-speed development of the social economy and the continuously intensified reform of the investment system in China, environmental impact assessment has become a compulsory approval procedure before the start of construction projects. This is a major measure for the prevention of pollutions and damages to ecological environment caused by new projects, and a sustainable development strategy implemented by China, as well as an important manifestation of E.P. policy with preventive measures as top priority.

为此本设计将对白云区龙博置地广场进行环境影响评价, 主要进行调查和分析项目环境污染和生态破坏现状, 根据建设项目污染物排放状况，结合场地周围环境特点，确定评价范围。对地下水、空气和声环境进行现状评价; 通过对建设项目的建设过程所造成的各种污染及生态破坏的预测, 确定了评价项目对环境影响的范围和程度; 分析论证项目现有污染防治措施的可行性和合理性, 提出有效的生态环境破坏减缓、恢复与补偿措施, 从环境保护及生态恢复角度论证项目建设的可行性, 为相关工作提供科学依据。
The design of this thesis is to conduct an environmental impact assessment on the Mall constructed by Longbo Realty Ltd. in Gui Yang City’s Baiyun District, mainly to investigate and analyze the environmental pollution and the present state of damages to the eco-environments caused by this project. Firstly, the assessment range is determined by considering the project’s pollutant emission status and the features surrounding the site, followed by evaluation on the present state of ground water, air and acoustic environments. Then assessment on the scope and extent of the impact to environments caused by the project will be determined by anticipating the various pollutions and damages to eco-environments which will be caused by the project during its construction process; and effective measures to slow down, restore and compensate the damages to the eco-environments are proposed after analytic demonstration has been conducted on the feasibility and rationality of the pollution-preventive measures adopted by the project. Finally, the feasibility of this construction project is expounded and verified from the perspective of E.P. and eco-recovery, so as to provide scientific basis to the relevant operations.

关键词：环境污染，可持续发展，可行性
Key words: environmental pollution; sustainable development; feasibility

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Abstract

Along with the rapid development of social economy and the continuous deepening of Investment system of our country, the EIA (Environmental Impact Assessment) has been one of the examining and approving steps of construction project before it starts up. It is one of the important actions to prevent the pollution and damage of environment going to be caused by the new project, and it is also an important reflection of implementing the stratey of sustainable development and proctising the 'prevention first' policy.

Therefore this design will carry out the EIA for Longbo Zhidi Square in Baiyun District. It mainly investigated and analized the current situation of environment pollution and ecocide damage. It determined the assessment domain according to the pollutant discharge status of construction project combining with the surrounding environmental quality. It investigated the current situation of ground water, air and acoustic environment. It confirmed the range and degree of the impact of the investigated project to environment by predicting the pullants and ecocide damage discharged from the construction process. It analized and demonstrated the feasibility and reasonableness of existing pollution prevention actions and proposed the actions for retarding,restoring and compensating the ecocide damage. It demonstrated the feasibility of the project construction as viewed from environment protection and ecological restoration, and provides the scientific proof for related works.

Key words: Environment pollution, Sustainable development, Feasibility.

注：1，龙博置地广场，建议音译，Landmark 为香港置地广场名称。

Abstract：
With China's sustained and rapid economic development and deepening investment system reform, environmental impact assessment of construction projects has become indispensable in the construction of a prior examination and approval,which is the main measures to prevent pollution and ecological destruction of China's strategy of sustainable development, the implementation of prevention-oriented environmental policy an important manifestation.
The design will end Bo Long, Baiyun District, Landmark, environmental impact assessment, investigation and analysis of major environmental pollution and ecological destruction project status, pollutant emissions under the construction project, with site characteristics of the surrounding environment to determine the scope of the evaluation. On groundwater, air and acoustic environment status quo assessment; through the construction process of the construction project caused by the pollution and ecological damage forecasts, the evaluation project to determine the scope and extent of environmental impact; analysis of existing pollution prevention demonstration projects The feasibility and rationality, to propose effective mitigation of ecological damage to the environment, restoration and compensation measures, from the perspective of environmental protection and ecological restoration project demonstrated the feasibility of providing a scientific basis for the relevant work.
Key words: environmental pollution, sustainable development, feasibility
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Because the developing social economy of our country continually and rapidly and the deepening of the reform of the investment system, Environmental impact assessment has become a necessary step before making construction, that is to prevent new projects from producing pollution and ecological environmental damage, and the main measures for implementing sustainable development strategy in China, implementing prevention the important embodiment of environmental policies.
Therefore, the design takes a environment impact appraisement of landmark of LongBo in Baiyun district. We will investigate and analyses the pollution and of the project and the present situation about Ecological destruction. We will identify the scale of analysis which are based on Project pollutants status, and are considered the Venue environment characteristics. That included five works, firstly, the groundwater, air harmonic environment assessment; secondly, determine the environmental impact of the evaluation items extent by using predicting all kinds of pollution and ecological destruction caused by construction process, thirdly, by analyzing the feasibility and rationality of the existing pollution prevention measures project, we will get effective measures of slow, restoration and compensation for ecological environmental damage, fourthly, we will proof the feasibility of the project construction in the point of view of environmental protection and ecological restoration, fifthly, we will provide scientific data for relevant works.
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