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Dear Prof Cook:
Welcome to Zhijiang!
It's so glad to hear you came to my beautiful city, Zhijiang , which is a historic city witnessing the end of invaders of the Japanese army during World War II. The Japanese government's ritual of surrender to China firstly happened in Zhijiang. That's why native people call her the peaceful city.
Knowing that you love travel, I'd like to recommend some of the most famous tourist attraction in Zhijiang. The city is also famous for its wind and rain bridge. The characteristic of the bridge is not only manufactured by woods, but also not any nail hammered in the bridge. It successfully gains the Guinness World Record for its length among the counterparts. American air forces had come to the city fo fight against the Japanese Fasicist troops，out common enemies, during World War II. We created a memorial hall for memorizing them, called Flying Tiger memorial. It also has turned into an attractive and noted scenery too.
Hopefully, I can help you and wish you delighted.
---Frater Maior Tong Anglais

看了第一句，就觉得有问题：今天是第一天上初中。。。