发短信啊?那就不要太罗嗦。
Dear Mr. XXX(你亲戚的名字), I'm XXX,the grandson of XXX and the son of XX (建议你说你亲戚认识的一个人就可以了。爷爷的孙子,或者爸爸的儿子,不要重复), My father called you yesterday(如果是上周一就说last Mon.). I've some questions about study overseas(如果在美国的话,就直接说in the USA,如果是泛指海外学习的话,就用overseas)May I call you for some advise, when you are convenient? Thank you!
完整的:
Dear Mr. XXX! I'm XXX, the son of XXX. My father called you last Mon. I've some questions about study in the USA. May I call you for some advise, when you are convenient? Thank you!
最后的thank you 可加可不加,最好等对方回复以后再谢谢
Hello xx
This is xx,whose son of xx grandson of xx.
My father talked you several days ago.I hope I can study in a great collage in UK/US 看他是哪个国家,UK是英国,US美国,AU澳洲. I want to know some details about this.please replay me when you are free and I will call you.thank you
Regards
Xx
Hello, Mr.****(你要找的人的姓氏). Sorry to disturb you. I'm ***, son of ****. My father had contacted you several days ago. If I get a chance, I do want to study aboard. Since I'm not familiar with some details about studying aboard, could I seek advice from you? Please let me know when you are available, and I will give you a call.
个人觉得没有加 “我是**的孙子”这句话的必要,毕竟联系他的是你的父亲。 另外如果对方是教授的话,开头换成Dr.***。 希望对你有帮助。
Hello,Mr.xx. What's going on with you? I'm xx's grandson, xx's son. My father called you several days ago. I send this message to ask for your help. If it's possible, I hope to study abroad. However, I don't know much about your country.So, can you help me with my problems? If it's convenient for you now, please reply me and I will call you.^_^
希望可以帮到楼主。
hi,I am** ,**grandson,and**son.My father called you a few days ago.If it is possible I want to go abroad for further education,but I do not konw what I should do.Could I ask you something
about it? If you have free time please reply me by SMS. I will call you when you reply me.
纯手打..望采纳..没有语病..
经过我的鉴定,他回答得很好。你给分吧。