写作思路:要直接简化任务语言。在叙述中,我们要把直接叙述变成间接叙述,尽可能简化人物语言。这样,即使情节连贯,又使语句“简练”。
Today is sunday.It's raining cats and dogs outside in the open air now.And a strong wind occurred at the same time.
Our family members have to stay at home.We cannot go anywhere.Father is watching his favourite football match on TV.Mother is busy making meals.
My sister is wrting her homework carefully and so am I.I hope it can be fine in no time so that I play outside.
翻译:
今天是星期天,外面正下着倾盆大雨,同时还刮起了大风。
我们的家人必须呆在家里。我们哪儿也不能去。爸爸正在电视上看他最喜欢的足球比赛。妈妈正忙着做饭。
我妹妹正在认真写作业,我也是。我希望天气能很快好起来,这样我就可以出去玩了。
It’s on Saturday morning at 9:00 It is a beautifui sunny day 。My family all stayed at home。My mother was cleaning the room。My father was helping my mother。My grandparents were watching TV。And I was playing computer games。My brother was writing to his penpal。We were having a good time!
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