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14:28 A and B received CCTV copy machine, called a floor call high smoke alarm. Immediately to check. After two minutes, A back to inform CCTV high fire, and to inform the operator a floor high fire, immediately to the fire process.
14:33 chief engineer and general manager, D, hotel fire and security staff rushed to the scene of the fire.
A minute later, the hotel general manager issued an order, the fire is not under control, immediate full hotel fire evacuation.
Hotel fire control director A received the chief engineer's instruction, immediately start Hotel evacuation, fire alarm and emergency evacuation of large, broadcast throughout the hotel within the scope of work. Fire evacuation began.
At the same time, the hotel fire in under the command of captain B, arranged in a fire drill sites, " North hillock " expansion hose laying and gun positions. Another firefighter portable fire extinguisher.
According to the plan, the engineering staff of C immediate landing S11-S14 four staff elevator, then four service elevators all fall to the floor, the elevator door opened. In addition to S14 fire elevator key operation, the remaining elevators stopped work.
14:50 hotel in addition to cause manager agreed to stay to work, all staff were evacuated to the north of the collection.
Hotel fire and security to the evacuation team before the parade.
The 9 14:55 general manager announced that the great fire evacuation ends, each sector can return to their work. At the same time to the hotel playing fire evacuation termination notice.
The evacuation of the success:
Ready, the director of engineering under the personal supervision of fire protection evacuation, we each detail careful scrutiny, to participate in the evacuation of the staff conducted a careful arrangement. In strict accordance with the hotel's emergency evacuation procedure personnel arrangement. Fire pump room, generator room we have arrangements for staff to participate in, respectively, E and F. in addition, according to the director of engineering instructions, we in the 5 floor and 22 floor of refuge layer are also arranged in the engineering staff were evacuated to guide, are H and G.
In the great fire evacuation, we invited with a fire detection qualified testing company to our hotel fire-prevention facilities for fire detection, found problems in a timely manner to repair, so that our equipment is at the normal state.
The Department's fire evacuation in the evacuation, can do a good job.
There is insufficient: evacuation after the end of the personnel statistics is very troublesome. Various departments make form are not unified, some departments simply make a schedule, schedule that does not reflect who were evacuated and who were scheduled to stay. Some departments of the evacuation list of cash out. There are some departments in the evacuation of the evacuation list and the actual presence of department staff seriously, and the evacuation order does not reflect problems.

晕啊，可能楼上的不是很了解消防，楼主的CCTV拷机的意思应该是CCTV监控室的电话的意思吧。我就看了第一段，两边的英文翻译都有问题。楼主最好把中文简化，你这样别人翻译不好。
我英语不怎么好，不乱翻译了