帮我把这篇介绍谷歌的英文,再精简一下!

Google, started as a research project by Larry Page, an undergraduate in Stanford University, has become the most popular search engine in the world.
Page, together with his partner Sergey Brin , registered the google.com and set up the company on September 7, 1998.
Google gains money mainly from the commercials on its website, which started as early as 2000 and contributes a lot to its success in revenue.
Besides, other hot websites such as YouTube.com and Blogger etc. , either bought or created by google , also establish google as one of the leading roles in internet entreprises.
Google's success has inspired many internet entrepreneurs and works as a perfect model to be followed.
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Google,the company who serves as a perfect and inspiration for Internet entrepreneurs today,is the world's largest and most popular search engine.

It was established in January,1996 at Stanford University by Ph.D.Larry Page,who set up the company on September 7th,1998 and registered google.com with his partner Sergey Brin.

In 2000,Google began advertise on its website and recently,it has acquired YouTube.com and new features arise.Besides, it owns Blogger and other websites and has become the leader in terms of adbased revenue on the web.

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Google--the largest and most popular search engine.
It began in january 1996 as a research project at Stanford University by Ph.D. Student Larry Page.
in september 7,1998,Page and his partner Sergey Brin set up their company and registered the google.com,then in 2000 Google began to sell advertising on their website.
Google has recently acquired YouTube,also has owned Blogger and other hot websites and become the leader in terms of ad-based revenue on the web.
Google’s history serves as a perfect model and inspiration for internet entrepreneurs today.

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谷歌
世界上最大最受欢迎的搜索引擎。
历史完美的模型，互联网企业家的灵感，拥有博客，热门网站
1996年1月作为一个研究项目
1998年9月7日,注册
2000年谷歌开始在他们的网站上销售广告。
收购youtube来继添加新特性。
Google
The largest in the world's most popular search engine.
History perfect model, the Internet entrepreneur inspiration, has the blog, the popular web site
In January 1996 as a research project
On September 7, 1998, registered
In 2000, Google began in their web site sales advertising.
The acquisition of youtube to add new features.