1. slept 改成sleeping,正在进行时;
2. long 改成length,倍数+名词;
3.rang改成ringing,当时正在发生的事情;
4. are改成is,谓语和with前面的人保持一致;
5. make 改成making,regret doing sth,后悔曾今做过某事;
6. such改成so,so ……that……句型,如此……以致于……;
7. in改成on,在长江旁边用on;
8. surrounding 改成surrounded,被环绕,用-ed形式;
9. in the posssession of去掉 the ,固定句型 in posssession of
1. slept 改成sleeping
2. long 改成length
3. while 改成when
4. are改成is
5. make 改成making
6. such改成so
7. in改成on
8. surrounding 改成surrounded
9. in the posssession of去掉 the