翻译(汉译英)

I have a dream. I want to get a offer to a fashion institute and be a outstanding cloth designer after graduate. Although this dream seems faraway from me now, I will word hard to achieve it. Life is splendid because of dreams.(人生因梦想而精彩~)

一楼比我翻译的好，惭愧惭愧……

I have a dream - to get admitted into a fashion school and then become an excllent fashion designer. Although this dream is still remote for me at present, I will work hard to reach my goals. Only a life with dreams can be a wonderful life.