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Recently a special concert was hold by SEGA Company.

But what surprising us a lot is that all the singers of this concert were not real persons.

They were called virtual idols.

And now let's enjoy some pictures.

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The first one,

In this picture we can see a pretty girl names Hatsune Miku.

She is wearing a black skirt and blue shirt,

also blue with long hair and big eyes.

she looks very beautiful and seems like a (不太确定你要表达什么，可以加上一个你想说的名词)

As her charming and influence, she was the leader of this concert.

And now, she has overtaken many A-listers in Japanese with her competency.

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What's more, this concert is used a new technology called 3d holographic projective to show virtual idol.

Using this will make you feel that the virtual idol out of screen and really stood front of us.

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There was not only one incredible singer like Miku on this stage.

Look, the pretty girl who with long pink hear. Yes, that's right, Luka! She is a great singer, we can find her special when we hear her song. So pls have a try if you have intereste.

The next one, on the left of the picture, Len, she is wearing the most beautiful barrette I've ever seen.

And then comes our shining Rin, with a pair of bright and azure eyes. And this makes him like a new star in the show biz.

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This concert was extremely popular and all the 2,500 tickets were sold out in seconds.

What's more, over 30,000 fans watched the whole show through fee-vased internate(不太懂你想要表达什么) at night.

However, the great success of the vocal concert also caused a lot of argument: whether virtual idols could replace the real human idols to be a part of show biz.

We may also have the discussion after this activity, and now let's enjoy a short video cut out from the vocal concert.

我仔细研究了一下，稍微改了改，你参考一下，如果有不对的地方多包涵！
不过有一点一定要注意，这是演讲稿，所以词语要通俗易懂，不能生词太多，呵呵...

the vocal concert was extremely popular and all the 2,500 tickets were sold out in seconds.

What's more over 30,000 fans watched the whole live vocal concert through fee-vased internate at night.

Now Hatsune Miku has overtaken many Janpanese A-listers in terms(地位)of charisma and inflence.

But the great success of the vocal concert also rise a lot of debates.whether virtual idols could
replace the real human idols as a part of show biz.

last ,let's enjoy a short video cut out from the vocal concert

1.But surprisingly all the singers of this vocal concert was not real people
2.In this picture we can see a pretty girl named Hatsune Miku
3.this vocal concert is made by a new technology called 3d holographic projective to show virtual idol,
4.Although this sounds very crazy
5.she looks very beautiful
6.Len was wearing a most beautiful barrette
7.here comes our cute Rin with a pair of dazzling eyes in the color of azure which made him shine like a supernova.
匆匆看了一遍，不知可否.