帮我找找这段话里面有哪些语法点 T T··高分悬赏 越多越好 最好写详细点··速度要··

I guess you could say that I am "one in a million that引导的宾语从句。
there are not many people like me like me 做people的后置定语
,I have a muscle disease which makes me very weak which 引导的定语从句
, the doctor don't know how to make me better know后面省略that的宾语从句
have learned to adapt to my disability have+done 现在完成时

I guess you could say that I am "one in a million that引导的宾语从句。
there are not many people like me like me 做people的后置定语
,I have a muscle disease which makes me very weak which 引导的定语从句
, the doctor don't know how to make me better know后面省略that的宾语从句
have learned to adapt to my disability have+done 现在完成时
文章中还用到很多词组，跟你列一下吧
in other words 换句话说
in addition 另外
总体上还是很简单的一篇文章，语法不是很多。

I have a muscle disease which makes me very weak ，which用的是定语从句，指代muscular disease
In addition , sometime I am very clamsy and drop things or bump into furniture这句的sometime应该是sometimes，clamsy 应该是clumsy
Unfortunately , the doctor don't know how to make me better , 应该是dose not
have learned to adapt to my disability .现在完成时
大概就是这么多，文章衔接还是不错的有 In addition ，Unfortunately。但是用的都是一般现在时，没有被动语态什么的，总的来说还是不错的

XXXX experience 1.is a challenging one and 2.needs people who are excel at it. I am ready for challenges all the time. I 3.have taken a lot of exigent courses instead of easy A courses, since I know it is challenges that make people get 4.improved. Although I didn’t get as high GPA as other top students , I can proudly say that I will never 5.regret doing it. I transferred to XXXX all the way back from XXXX merely because I 6.am eager to do 7.something different and challenging. Now that XXXX is a great opportunity for me to see the world differently, why should I hesitate to have a try?

写得很好！我把改正的地方标上了序号，希望能帮到你。

I guess you could say that I am "one in a million ,I have a muscle disease which makes me very weak ,定语从句

1.In other words,there are not many people like me.
2.In addition , sometime I am very clamsy and drop things or bump into furniture . Unfortunately , the doctor don't know how to make me better , but I am very outgoing and have learned to adapt to my disability . my motto is :live one day at a time .