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在大学的两年，我学习了金融专业并且有了一定的基础。
In the two years of college life, I majored in Finance and Banking and get the base thought of this subject.
我非常喜欢金融专业.
I love this specialized subject a lot.
我的家乡和学校不是一个地方，一次回家，发现家里卖的东西比学校的便宜很多，我和朋友便有了做小生意的打算.
My hometown is far from the town where my college was located. Once when I went back home, I found stuff much cheaper than that near my college. Consequently I as well as some friends came up with a intention to run a trade of these goods.
我们利用家乡和学校东西的差价并调查了大学生的喜好，调查了大学生的消费水平.
We made a research about preference and consumption level of students in our college, on the basis of the price differences between the stuff from our college and my hometown.
我和同学在学校租了个小店铺，根据我们的调查，我们卖一些家乡的价格可以被普遍接受的美味小零食，以及一些卖些比学校便宜的东西.
We rent a store in our school and sold some tasty snacks chosen according to our research , the prices of which were acceptable, and some other things whose prices were cheaper than that sold in college,
对于挣的钱，我们会把部分存定期，部分炒股票，然后剩下的会去旅游。
The a part of the profits were deposited fixed, while another part speculated on stocks, and the rest were used for travelling.
所以我觉得学金融可以给我提供一套非常不错的理论体系来让我知道如何研究市场、货币的关系，同时有着很好的就业前景，能让我的才能得到发挥。
As a result, I realized that Finacial and banking could offer me a theoretical system for researching the relation of market and currency, while its career prospects contributes to my performance of skills.
我希望毕业以后可以从事与金融有关的机构，获得些经验然后自己创业。
I hope to be engaged in a financial institution with any luck, which would help me gain some experience for later pioneering.
我得知贵校是因为我姐姐是那里毕业的，很偶然的机会，我俩提到了你们学校，和我描述你们学校的时候，让我很憧憬，尤其是说学校的金融专业很不错的时候，立马让我决定去贵校就读。
The information about your college is learnt from my sister, who has graduated from your college. In once a conversation we spoke about this college by chance, and her description made me so longing to study here, especially when I leant that it's quite outstanding in finacial and banking.
我觉得去贵校读书能让我学到更多东西，让我以后有更好的发展。同时，你们学校的师资分配上的合理性以及悠久的历史，优美的环境，也让我慕名而来。
I believe that I could learn more at your college and develop myself well in the future. What's more, the reasonableness of qualified teachers and the long history of establishment attract me to a great extent.

（注：文中“学校”一词的翻译都用了college，特说明，如果LZ目前就读学校是专业类院校，如XXX商学院，XXX财经大学，则用college，如果是综合性院校,如浙大、北大之类，用university，而对于要申请的学校，用college还是university则看学校名字就可以知道。）有的地方把语言结构小小做了下改动，以保证句子结构的工整，但句意忠于原文，仔细读便知。

（我看楼上用这个方法挺好的，就学他这样了，不过翻译出来的绝对不一样~）
在大学的两年，我学习了金融专业并且有了一定的基础。
I had studied Financial and had the basic knowledge of Finance during the two years in university.
我非常喜欢金融专业.
I like Financial very much.
我的家乡和学校不是一个地方，一次回家，发现家里卖的东西比学校的便宜很多，我和朋友便有了做小生意的打算.
My home and my school aren't in a same place. Once when I went home, I found that things there are much more cheaper than that near my school. Therefore my friends and I thought of running a trade of these stuff.
我们利用家乡和学校东西的差价并调查了大学生的喜好，调查了大学生的消费水平.
We made a research about preference and consumption level of students in our college, on the basis of the price differences between the stuff from our college and my home.
我和同学在学校租了个小店铺，根据我们的调查，我们卖一些家乡的价格可以被普遍接受的美味小零食，以及一些卖些比学校便宜的东西.
We rent a store in our school and sold some tasty snacks chosen according to our research , which the prices were acceptable, and some other things whoich were cheaper than those sold in my school,
对于挣的钱，我们会把部分存定期，部分炒股票，然后剩下的会去旅游。
The a part of the profits were deposited fixed, while another part speculated on stocks, and the rest were used for travelling.
所以我觉得学金融可以给我提供一套非常不错的理论体系来让我知道如何研究市场、货币的关系，同时有着很好的就业前景，能让我的才能得到发挥。
Therefore, I realized that Finacial could offer me a theoretical system for researching the relation of market and currency, while its career prospects contributes to my performance of skills.
我希望毕业以后可以从事与金融有关的机构，获得些经验然后自己创业。
I hope to be engaged in a financial institution , which would help me to gain some experience for later pioneering.
我得知贵校是因为我姐姐是那里毕业的，很偶然的机会，我俩提到了你们学校，和我描述你们学校的时候，让我很憧憬，尤其是说学校的金融专业很不错的时候，立马让我决定去贵校就读。
I knew this school from my sister, who had graduated here. In once a conversation we talked about this college , and her description made me so longing to study here, when I knew that it's quite outstanding in finacial, I decided to study in this school immediately.
我觉得去贵校读书能让我学到更多东西，让我以后有更好的发展。同时，你们学校的师资分配上的合理性以及悠久的历史，优美的环境，也让我慕名而来。
I believe that I could learn more at this school and develop myself well in the future. Also, the reasonableness of qualified teachers, the long history of establishment and the beautiful environment attract me too.
英文水平一般，不一定行，不过还是看看吧。:)

In university two years, I learned financial professional and have a certain foundation, I really like finance specialty, my hometown and school, not a place a home, found his home sell more than the school is a lot cheaper, my friend and I will have a small business plan, we use our home and school things difference of students' preferences and examined, investigated the consumption level of college students at school, my classmates and I rented a small shops, according to our survey, we sell some home price can be widely accepted tasty snacks between meals, and some to sell some than school cheap things, to earn money, we will take part in the stock market deposit part, and the rest will travel. So I think learning financial can offer me a very nice theory system to let me know how to study the relationship between market, currency, as well as a good job prospects, can let my talents can be fulfilled. I hope after graduation can be engaged in relevant with finance institution, get some experience and their own business.

I knew the your school because my sister is there graduates, very accidental opportunity, we mentioned the your school, and I describe your school, let I'm looking forward to, especially say school finance specialty is very good, I decide to go to your school immediately to read. I feel to go to your school reading can let me learn more, let I later have a better development. At the same time, you of teachers of the school the rationality of the distribution and a long history, beautiful environment, but also let me of customers.