求一篇英文口语面试自我介绍

我的口语就是跟这家老师学习提高的，1：1的授课方式 我都是工作.好.下班九点后才回家上线ABC天丅口语上课 现在我也学的差不多了~语感慢慢的培养起来了 语法运用的也还不错 感觉还不错哦，你也行的，加油!我也面试过五星级酒店的招聘（最后聘上了的，呵呵不要紧张不是在讲失败的经验哈）。希望下面经验对你来说有参考介值。其实在见到考官时做到仪态端庄，大方自然地做个简短的自我介绍就好了。特别是你又准备了简历，自我介绍时再口头复述一遍不但没有必要，还很有可能发生你背得不熟，说的时候吞吞吐吐的情况这样反而打击自己信心又给考官留下坏影像。建议你当天到考室时先微笑着给考官打招呼，说明你的来意注意简短！通常在考官示意你坐下后再递上你的简历。当然考官说英语你才回答英语哈，反正就是要对应。记得上次我面试的时候都是英文中文转过去转过来的。一般不会问到你简历上已经陈述过的事情，所以你要准备可以准备一些其他的东西。如果全程都是用英语面试的话，就算有准备也最好不要死背，容易出岔子。临场发挥让他们能明白你想表达的意思就行了。最后在面试结束的时候记得说一句“thanksforyourpatient”（感谢你这么耐心地面试我）会加分的。由于基本上酒店内不管什么职位会面对客户。所以他们喜欢招有服务意识，彬彬有礼的应聘者。当然也不要给人低声下气的感觉。说这么多自己都觉得罗嗦了。那就祝你应聘成功了！

Hello every leader , my name is XXX. I’m 20 years old。My family is located in tongzhou district,Beijing city。It’s near from light rail 。So it is very easy for me to go downtown.I majored in software technology in college，and my profession in technical secondary school is financial accounting. I’m cheerful in my character,and I’m adaptable. My biggest characteristic is confident 。I think it’s of great fun to accept challenge.Being faced with the coming graduation, I'm eager to have a dependable and more developmental work. Although I am poorly experienced , but I will try my best to study hard。I think I can do better。

因为有些错误，所以我改了改楼上的答案。

Hello leaders , my name is XXX. I’m 20 years old。I live in tongzhou district, Beijing city。It’s very near the train station。So it is very easy for me to go downtown.I learnt software technology in college，and my profession in technical secondary school is financial accounting. I have a cheerful character,and I’m adaptive. My biggest characteristic is that i am very confident 。I like to take up challenges. Facing the coming graduation, I'm eagered to have a dependable and more developmental work. Although I am poorly experienced , but I will try my best to study hard and strive for the better.

Hello,Dear Managers,My name is xxx ,20years old,living in tongzhou district of beijing,there will be the sunny day for me working in center since light railway was built near from my house.
Fund accountant was finished in my technical secondary school and professionally studied software technology during college.I am a confident man in favor of challenges,good ability in adjustment with open mind.
I am eagerly getting a job of stability & development with large space,would love to make more efforts to obtaining more experience on the working processes and achieve top level goal of our position by the coming graduation.

翻译不好的请指出来 互相学习 谢谢