求一篇主题为hand by hand的英语演讲稿，1-3分钟，题目可自拟，必须是有关友谊的。急急急急~有悬赏

Hello! My name is xxx. I am eleven. I am a little lovely girl. I am studying at Daicheng primary school. And my topic is about friendship. We all have friends. Sometimes we will get their help, and wu feel warm. This is friendship, money cannot replace it! During a running game, I wrest, everyone ran in front of me. My chothes are dirty. Everyone dislikes dirty,and is unwilling to help me , only my good friend come to help me. At that time I was grateful to her, and since then I understood the meaning of friendship. It is the eternal and priceless. We should cherish our friendship. Let us hand in hand together with our friends, help each other, forever. Thank you!
很多错误啊……不好说了……帮你改过了都……希望有帮助吧
①不是we each have friends是we all have friends
②直接写 sometimes 就可以了，不用加in
下面还有很多语法错误。。。。自己再改改

hand by hand那个演讲啊。。。。如果是那个什么新加坡的。。应该是关于自然灾难的吧。。不是友谊。。。最好别用网上的，咱自己写。。虽然不会太完美但有点错是可以，谁没有错呢？！
祝你演讲成功啊~~~~~~~

人活在这个世界上，离不开的是朋友之间友谊。当我伤心的时候，朋友能给我依靠的肩膀。当我独自流泪的时候，朋友能让我心情愉快。友谊拥有一种神奇的力量，使我为之震撼。当你帮别人捡一支笔时，或许就认识了，然后就成了朋友。人生的财富是无穷无尽的，但真正的财富是什么呢？是金钱？是权势？都不是----朋友之间的友谊才是永久的财富。当你知道朋友的价值时，就别太在意朋友之间的争吵，你应该知道：友谊不在一时，而在平时；不凭年龄，而凭心灵。只有用心去交友的人才能获得真正的友谊。

①不是we each have friends是we all have friends
②直接写 sometimes 就可以了，不用加in
下面还有很多语法错误。。。。自己再改改

hand by hand那个演讲啊。。。。如果是那个什么新加坡的。。应该是关于自然灾难的吧。。不是友谊。。。最好别用网上的，咱自己写。。虽然不会太完美但有点错是可以，谁没有错呢？！
祝你演讲成功啊~~~~~~~

Hello! My name is xxx. I am eleven. I am a little lovely girl. I am studying at Daicheng primary school. And my topic is about friendship. We all have friends. Sometimes we will get their help, and wu feel warm. This is friendship, money cannot replace it! During a running game, I wrest, everyone ran in front of me. My chothes are dirty. Everyone dislikes dirty,and is unwilling to help me , only my good friend come to help me. At that time I was grateful to her, and since then I understood the meaning of friendship. It is the eternal and priceless. We should cherish our friendship. Let us hand in hand together with our friends, help each other, forever. Thank you!
很多错误啊……不好说了……帮你改过了都……希望有帮助吧

新中联合举办的内个活动么··
你这根本不是演讲稿，是一个故事····
你要是比赛说这个，就是跟观众讲故事··拿不到高分的··除非你是小学低年级的小宝宝··评委可能会因为你的单词量大而给你N多分··
用心写把··这篇可以算偏题了··中心根本没出来··这篇中文作文都算差的··你语法错误再多也得紧扣中心啊··那个自我介绍可以一句话了结，哪有那么麻烦的··明显凑字数··（I'm a 11-year-old girl in XXX primary school,today I want to···） 而且这是演讲稿，不是作文，用的语言和作文是不一样的，你这篇一点都不生动··演讲稿写得好在于要打动评委···
语法错误连篇，有动词还用IS，该加IS不加等等，你是写好了中文再查字典翻译英文的么 ，都是类似HOW OLD ARE YOU=怎么老是你 的那种英文【想起了可爱的金山词霸··】
还得多练练啊，语句要精炼而无措，不需要很难的、没怎么学过的词汇，那些词你都不知道该怎么用，不知道用什么介词，搭配名词还是其他什么
很想帮你，不过我也被可爱的英语老师强行推荐参加了，我自己还得写呢，希望上面的东西能帮你