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From the ancient times to the present, there are people thinking that numbers may have magic power and some specific numbers will bring them good luck. Many Chinese businessmen like the number of 8 and they hold that it means prosperity. Most importantly,it will make their business getting better and better. Morover,some high school students,especially those who are about to attend the university entrance examination, like to choose the seats numbered 8,18,28,38 or 58, because they considered the numbers will help them pass the exam or enter universities easily.
Although some people think that good numbers will bring good luck, others hold whatever they are lucky or not, totally unconcerned with the good numbers or bad numbers. They believe in if anyone is working hard or studying hard, he should become a lucky man. On the contrary, lazy people who always stay at home and haven't worked,but he often hope a good number of 8 will bring good luck to themselves, it just a dream!
As far as I'm concerned,I think it is absurd that a good number can help us pass exams or make more money.So everybody should work or study hard and shouldn't make a fuss over a good number, such as "8","18" or "28".

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