英语作文:An unforgettable day(难忘的一天)60字的短文

2024年11月15日 10:08
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An Unforgettable Day 难忘的一天;一个难忘的日子;难忘的一天是某年某月某日例句 1.It was really an unforgettable day and I hope to go there once more. 真是一次难忘的一天,我希望去那里一次。 2.It made me very happy. It was an unforgettable day for me. 这令我很高兴,这真是难忘的一天。 3.Today is an unforgettable day to me. 今天对我来说是一个难忘的日子。 4.Today was an unforgettable day for me. 今天是我难忘的一天。 5.I think it was really an unforgettable day. 我想这真是难忘的一天。

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My happy Spring Festival
After the New Year’s Eve dinner with my family,we began to sit down in front of the TV,and enjoyed 2008 CCTV Spring Festival gala.
At about ten o’clock,the black sky was lightened by lots of fireworks with colorful light and happy sound.We stop watching the CCTV 2008 CCTV Spring Festival gala,and began to climb up the balcony to see the beautiful fireworks view,and my father took some fireworks up,and we also began to play fireworks.What a beautiful night.
Later,my cell phone was ringing all the time.I received lots of short messages from my friends and classmates.They all blessed me happy New Year.I gave same bless to them by sending back the happy words.At almost 12 pm,I made a wish in New Year,and began to sleep.
This is my happiest time of the year.
我的快乐春节
吃完年夜饭后,我们一家人开始坐在电视机前,观看2008年春节晚会.
大概十点钟左右,黑暗的天空被许多五彩缤纷的礼花照亮了,阵阵礼花声洋溢喜悦之气.于是我们不看晚会了,开始爬上阳台去看礼花夜景.父亲也把我们家的礼花拿出来,让我们去放.真的好漂亮的夜晚.
过了一会,我的手机不停地响个不停.我收到很多来自我的朋友和同学的祝福短信,他们都祝福我新年快乐.我回了短信,也祝他们新年快乐.在接近12点时,我在即将到来的新年里许了个愿,然后就睡觉了.
这是一年之中我最幸福的时候.

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A possible version: An Unforgettable Day I’ll never forget June 11th, 2012. It was a sunny day. On the way to school, my friend did something rude to me. It made me sad. What’s worse, I got a “C” in my favorite subject. After school, I went home unhappily. It was dark in the room. Suddenly the lights were on, and I heard the song “Happy birthday”. I was surprised to see many people and a big cake. “Oh, it’s my birthday.” I was so excited and happy. It was my first time to have a birthday party. I’ll never forget that day. 试题分析:这是一篇提纲类作文,要求根据自己的回忆以一篇叙事性短文,记述自己难忘的一件事情。动笔前先要认真阅读写作提示,注意从四个方面进行叙述。由于是回忆性短文,故用过去时态较多,注意时态和时间状语的搭配。写作中选取自己比较熟悉的内同写,注意适当使用连词,序数词,做到上下文联系紧密,符合逻辑关系,不要犯语法书写的低级错误。

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An Unforgettable Day I’ll never forget June 11th, 2012. It was a sunny day. On the way to school, my friend did something rude to me. It made me sad. What’s worse, I got a “C” in my favorite subject. After school, I went home unhappily. It was dark in the room. Suddenly the lights were on, and I heard the song “Happy birthday”. I was surprised to see many people and a big cake. “Oh, it’s my birthday.” I was so excited and happy. It was my first time to have a birthday party. I’ll never forget that day.