帮我修改一下我的英语作文，特别是语法的知识＿＿＿＿＿＿one day.Mr wang arrive

One day,Mr. Wang went to Beijing for a visit.
When he arrived,he felt very excited.
After he had found a hotel to live in and went out for shopping,he suddenly found his ID card lost.
He felt so upset that he began to look for it everywhere .
Nowhere could he found it,Mr.Wang got quite worried and went back hurriedly.
When Mr. Wang got back to the hotel,the hotel boss gave his ID card back to him.
Mr.Wang was very happy and said "Thanks" again and again to the boss.

祝你开心如意！

One day,Mr wang went to Beijing for a visit. When he arrvied he felt excited. He found a hotel to live.Sunddenly he found his ID card was missing. He felt so upset that he was looking for it everywhere. He was very worried. When Mr.wang got back to the hotel. The hotel owner gave him his ID card back, Mr.wang said thank to boss.He looked happy again.

哥们，你这英语是吃力了点，只能尽力在你原文上修改了一下。

One day.Mr wang arrived in Beijing for a visit.when Mr wang arrvied ,he felt excited.And he look for a hotel to live.when he found that he lost his ID.He felt upset.So he look for the hotel.He was very worried.When Mr.wang got back the hotel.The hotel boss give back his ID，So Mr.wang said thanks to the boss of the hotel.He look like happy.