那位英语高手能帮我翻译这一段自我介绍？我想参加一个面试

本来不想帮你翻译的，这样会培养你的惰性，但你急用，只能努力翻译一下了
Hi,Sir
Allow me to introduce myself,my name is XXX, It's a great honour for me to talk with you this chance.
My educational background and other profiles
are all in my resume ，there is no necessity to repeat it. Now ,I will give a brief introduction on my job advantage and career value.
I came to realize the importance of work as a secretary through working in administration several years,and I love this job.I think that secretary is an ordinary but important post。The secretary is a company's society soul, work as a
secretary needs strong sense of responsibility !
I consider it within my capacity to do a good job in every field as a secretary ,give me a chance ,give you a surprise!I will devote all my energies to our company's development! may your company be a winner in the competition tide!

本着对你负责的初衷，我认真的翻译了一下，但最后一段我完全改了你的话。
最后一段是这样的：
我相信我有能力作好秘书这个职业领域里的各项工作，给我一个机会，给您一个惊喜，我将为公司发展鞠躬尽瘁，最后一句是祝愿的话。祝愿贵公司在竞争大潮中成为胜者！
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一楼的有些语法错误，仔细看我和他的有什么不同。我来帮帮你翻译吧。
Hello,sir
My name is***.Thank you for giving me a chance for the interview.
My basic materials are on the resume, do not need to explain it again。I will make a brief introduce on my job advantage and my value here.
Working on administrative jobs for many years make me realize the importance of the secretarial job deeply. I like the job very much.
In my opinion, the secretarial jobs are common but very important.It representes the image of a company. If someone want to do will in a job ,he or she must posesses a extreme strong sense of responsibility .
I am willing to accompany with your company's development and progress. Your trust and my capability will bring us success ! Thanks!

hi,sir
my name is ,thank you for giving me a chance to interview.
my basic materials are on the resume, do not need to explain again. Whether in here, I make a brief of the job advantage and value of mine. The administrative work for many years, make me realize the importance of the secretarial job deeply, like to have this job even more. I think , the secretarial post is ordinary but very important, he has represented the image of a company, if do a good job, must possess the extremely strong sense of responsibility . I like development with your company altogether, progress, bring us common success to new trust and capability of me of you! Thanks!