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大家帮忙我看一看我写的这个英语作文，看看哪里需要多改一改更好，特别是一些比较明显的错误，

2024年11月15日 11:03

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网友（1）：

Maybe someday I will become a rich man.I will own a lot of wealth then I will do something I espect to do for a long time.First at all I will donate some money to poor family that let the child can go to school to learn,the old people can enjoy their life.Secondly,I will spend some money to make my parent life better.the last but not least is do some investment to contribute to our country's economics.

网友（2）：

I was surprised to find the campus was so large.

网友（3）：

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网友（4）：

It tells us once we make our choice,