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In a afternoon, some woman was laid up with an illness on the bed,
his pet dog its name is called George, it saw its master get sick
Opened the door to walk bites a passer-by in the street on with the mouth to pull the passer-by to its house in ` that passer-by sees on the woman back which was laid up with an illness to a car
hospital ~!

我的翻译:

One afternoon, a woman was sick lying on her bed. She has a pet dog called George. When it realized its master was ill, the dog opened the door and went into the street. The dog draged a passerby into the house using its mouth. In the end, the passerby carried the sick woman to his car and drove to a hospital.

One afternoon,a lady was lying in bed with illness.Her puppy named Joe felt that his master was sick ,so he pushed the door open and went to the street.He nibbled at a passerby and dragged that man into the house.The moment that man saw the ill lady he carried the lady into a car and sent her to hospital .

写得比较简单，请参考一下。

Some afternoon, a woman had fallen ill on her bed, her dog by the name of George saw the master(which is the woman fallen ill on the bed)had fallen ill so he pushed the door open and walked to the street, he then used the mouth, bited and dragged a Pedestrian passing by into the house. The Pedestrian saw the woman whom had fallen ill on the bed and drove her to the hospital.

one day afternoon,there was a lady getting sick and lying in bed.her pet dog whose name is george,noticing his master was ill,going out and gripping a passer-by to took it back to the house.that passer-by noticed this and drvoe the lady to the hospital